Thursday, October 4, 2007

EMPTY..!!

Empty thoughts empty mind
empty is all that's left behind

Empty heart empty soul
empty is what has made me whole

Empty poems empty prose
empty is all that within me grows

Empty muse empty force
empty i write without remorse..

12 comments:

C R D said...

lovely poem...conveys a lot with few words .:)

Gonecase said...

Empty is a state of mind
Its not something you can find

Because emptiness isn't an entity in itself, its absence of all other entities. Amazing write :)

umangexuberance said...

@crd
thanks :)

@gonecase
i feel empty is an entity in itself
and thanks :)

Gonecase said...

Different people, different perceptions and welcome :D

Rashi said...

great expression...keep it on !

umangexuberance said...

@rashi
thanks i'll try my best :)

suar said...

empty is that exists..
its we who fill it in..
fearful of emptiness..

but life, is empty in itself..

umangexuberance said...

@suar
beautiful lines...loved them..

chacha said...
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chacha said...

Empty is what takes me in
Empty is what I become then
As Empty as Empty...

great thoughts man...
kudos for coming up with .. and penning it down...

umangexuberance said...

@chacha
thanks
and thanks for those beautiful lines too

Empty is what takes me in
Empty is what I become then
As Empty as Empty...


wow

Ozigx said...

Emptilly Lovely Poem :).

Empty words fill
Empty page
Empty colors
Empty rage,
Empty tears from
Empty eyes
Empty head forms
Empty lies,
Empty meanings
Empty woe
Empty come and
Empty go,
Empty bets, an
Empty sin
Empty money from an
Empty win,
Empty arms clutch
Empty soul
Empty heartache
Empty role,
Empty terror
Empty day
Empty night darkens
Empty way,
Empty feelings
Empty curse
Empty dreams wrote this
Empty verse.