Empty words fill Empty page Empty colors Empty rage, Empty tears from Empty eyes Empty head forms Empty lies, Empty meanings Empty woe Empty come and Empty go, Empty bets, an Empty sin Empty money from an Empty win, Empty arms clutch Empty soul Empty heartache Empty role, Empty terror Empty day Empty night darkens Empty way, Empty feelings Empty curse Empty dreams wrote this Empty verse.
12 comments:
lovely poem...conveys a lot with few words .:)
Empty is a state of mind
Its not something you can find
Because emptiness isn't an entity in itself, its absence of all other entities. Amazing write :)
@crd
thanks :)
@gonecase
i feel empty is an entity in itself
and thanks :)
Different people, different perceptions and welcome :D
great expression...keep it on !
@rashi
thanks i'll try my best :)
empty is that exists..
its we who fill it in..
fearful of emptiness..
but life, is empty in itself..
@suar
beautiful lines...loved them..
Empty is what takes me in
Empty is what I become then
As Empty as Empty...
great thoughts man...
kudos for coming up with .. and penning it down...
@chacha
thanks
and thanks for those beautiful lines too
Empty is what takes me in
Empty is what I become then
As Empty as Empty...
wow
Emptilly Lovely Poem :).
Empty words fill
Empty page
Empty colors
Empty rage,
Empty tears from
Empty eyes
Empty head forms
Empty lies,
Empty meanings
Empty woe
Empty come and
Empty go,
Empty bets, an
Empty sin
Empty money from an
Empty win,
Empty arms clutch
Empty soul
Empty heartache
Empty role,
Empty terror
Empty day
Empty night darkens
Empty way,
Empty feelings
Empty curse
Empty dreams wrote this
Empty verse.
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